Stephen Mitchell vs Caroline Alexander Iliad Translation Comparison

Years: 2011 and 2016

Mitchell's translation of the Iliad prioritizes readability and poetic language, capturing the emotional depth and societal norms of ancient Greece, while Alexander's translation focuses on accuracy and faithfully maintains the structure and rhythm of the original epic poem.

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Stephen Mitchell

The rage of Achilles—sing it now, goddess, sing through me
the deadly rage that caused the Achaeans such grief
and hurled down to Hades the souls of so many fighters,
leaving their naked flesh to be eaten by dogs
and carrion birds, as the will of Zeus was accomplished.
Begin at the time when bitter words first divided
that king of men, Agamemnon, and godlike Achilles.

Caroline Alexander

Wrath—sing, goddess, of the ruinous wrath of Peleus' son Achilles,
that inflicted woes without number upon the Achaeans,
hurled forth to Hades many strong souls of warriors
and rendered their bodies prey for the dogs,
for all birds, and the will of Zeus was accomplished;
sing from when they two first stood in conflict—
Atreus' son, lord of men, and godlike Achilles.

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