Rodney Merrill vs W. H. D. Rouse Iliad Translation Comparison

Years: 2009 and 2007

Merrill's translation of the Iliad is known for its lyrical and poetic language, capturing the beauty and complexity of Homer's epic, while Rouse's translation focuses on clarity and accessibility, making the story more approachable and easy to understand for modern readers.

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Rodney Merrill

Sing now, goddess, the wrath of Achilles the scion of Peleus,
ruinous rage which brought the Achaians uncounted afflictions;
many the powerful souls it sent to the dwelling of Hades,
those of the heroes, and spoil for the dogs it made of their bodies,
plunder for all of the birds, and the purpose of Zeus was accomplished—
sing from the time when first stood hostile, starting the conflict,
Atreus' scion, the lord of the people, and noble Achilles.

W. H. D. Rouse

An angry man—There is my story: The bitter rancour of Achillês, prince of the house of Peleus, which brought a thousand troubles upon the Achaian host. Many a strong soul it sent down to Hadês, and left the heroes themselves a prey to dogs and carrion birds, while the will of God moved on to fulfilment.
It began first of all with a quarrel between my lord King Agamemnon of Atreus' line and the Prince Achillês.

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