Herbert Jordan vs W. H. D. Rouse Iliad Translation Comparison

Years: 2008 and 2007

Jordan's translation of the Iliad captures the epic's grandeur and poetic beauty with its rich language and meticulous attention to detail, while Rouse's translation offers a more accessible and reader-friendly version that focuses on clear storytelling and dialogue.

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Herbert Jordan

Sing, goddess, of Peleus' son Achilles' anger,
ruinous, that caused the Greeks untold ordeals,
consigned to Hades countless valiant souls,
heroes, and left their bodies prey for dogs
or feast for vultures. Zeus's will was done
from when those two first quarreled and split apart,
the king, Agamemnon, and matchless Achilles.

W. H. D. Rouse

An angry man—There is my story: The bitter rancour of Achillês, prince of the house of Peleus, which brought a thousand troubles upon the Achaian host. Many a strong soul it sent down to Hadês, and left the heroes themselves a prey to dogs and carrion birds, while the will of God moved on to fulfilment.
It began first of all with a quarrel between my lord King Agamemnon of Atreus' line and the Prince Achillês.

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