Robert Fitzgerald vs Herbert Jordan Iliad Translation Comparison

Years: 1974 and 2008

Fitzgerald's translation of the Iliad captures the poetic beauty and emotional depth of Homer's epic, while Jordan's translation offers a more contemporary and accessible interpretation that focuses on the narrative flow and clarity of the text.

Passage comparison

Robert Fitzgerald

Anger be now your song, immortal one,
Akhilleus' anger, doomed and ruinous,
that caused the Akhaians loss on bitter loss
and crowded brave souls into the undergloom,
leaving so many dead men—carrion
for dogs and birds; and the will of Zeus was done.

Herbert Jordan

Sing, goddess, of Peleus' son Achilles' anger,
ruinous, that caused the Greeks untold ordeals,
consigned to Hades countless valiant souls,
heroes, and left their bodies prey for dogs
or feast for vultures. Zeus's will was done
from when those two first quarreled and split apart,
the king, Agamemnon, and matchless Achilles.

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